peer assessment

From my peer assessment feedback on my five magazine front covers where explored with different layouts. The improvements I need to do from feed back include different elements from the magazine front covers.
Sound magazine- From the Sound magazine I believe I need to add more text/cover lines to make sure the magazine looks full and exploding full of information. The star with the information about the prize should be smaller as it is taking up too much room and takes focus off the main image. although there were good elements to the magazine because the masthead was appropriate to the magazine and the cover lines were located sensibly as they don't cover all of the main image.


BJORK magazine- from the Bjork magazine next time i need to add just a few more cover lines and maybe a puff to allow the magazine to stand out more and catch the viewers attention. the positive side to this magazine is that it looks professional and eye catching; the black and white colours are effective and grab our attention straight away. the masthead is also effective because it follows the theme and looks cool as part as the magazine.


Drake magazine- this drake magazine needs improvements for the next time. the cover lines need sorting out as they look all over the place and not in designated places to allow the magazine o look professional. the masthead alos needs to change colour as it is the only blue colour on the magazine and many can argue it looks odd and not part of the magazine. the positive for this magazine is that the exclusive and power 30 looks professional and effective as it shows efficiency.

Towers magazine- the cover lines on this magazine need to be re constructed as the positioning of the cover lines are not effective nor professional, they looks clustered, therefore the next time i create a magazine i will make sure the cover lines are spaced out. the positives for this magazine is the masthead, it looks effective and is an eye catcher, it is unusual but effective because it grabs our attention, therefore creating an interesting magazine.

Pitch magazine- in this magazine i could have included a puff or a pug to make sure the magazine is more effective. i could have also created more cover lines on both sides of the magazine to make sure the magazine front cover looked full. the positives of the magazine is the main cover line as it stands out and grabs the readers attention right away.