Here i have made a few improvements that i revived from a peer assessment from friends. For first i changed the mast head as his font is more appropriate to the pop genre, although this picture is blurry this was just a rough example of what mast head would suit best. i wil be using this font (Plakette 5 SF) i hjave chosenthis because it looks more t do with the pop genre rather than the last mast in in my previous post for my first draft. http://snoweasmedia.blogspot.co.uk/2016/01/drafting-and-planning-first-draft.html. i have also moved around the cover lines as i believe they look more professional and suitable for a pop magazine.
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