organisation

after reviewing my double page spread i did not like how it was set out. after careful thinking i believe that i could improve this for the next time i create a double page spread. the layout could be be better and more organised, i feel like there is too much info and too much in this page.

here i have looked into a Jessie j double page spread this is what  could experiment with by butting the information into isles so that it looks well presented and suitable to the target audience. this type of double page spread i also like because the main image on the left looks like it is coming out at you therefore creating a eye catching image.